Develop your outline to ensure your story is set up for success with an Outline Analysis.
Tighten up your plot, round out your characters and fill in the gaps with an Editorial Assessment.
Sharpen your story up to the last edge of the fine details with our Manuscript Editing services.
VISION
elcome! I’m Elena, a freelance editor whose biggest dream is to help you achieve yours.
Awaken My Story is an invocation that we share. There is a wonderful story dwelling within you, and I know this for a fact. We all have lived experiences, thoughts and perspectives that have accumulated within for us to turn them into stories that mean something. Whereby doing so, we are able to pass on the lessons we’ve learnt through our stories and help a reader feel less alone. By working together, we will journey to awaken your fullest potential, creating something you’ll be proud of passing on.
I have a Bachelor of Communications with a major in Creative Writing, a Diploma in Language and a Postgraduate Certificate in Editing and Publishing. I have 4+ years of editing experience so far on my freelancing journey and have relished in every second.
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SERVICES
I help writers improve, work through and identify any blocks or weaknesses in their stories at every stage of the manuscript. Whether it be through outline analysis, editorial assessment or manuscript editing, my services will help bring your story to life at an affordable rate. Because everybody deserves a shot at their dreams.
TIMELINE OF EDITS
TESTIMONIALS
Sophia Olson, Outline Analysis
“Would hire again and again! She was thoughtful and very detailed in her response. Felt like I gained a new perspective and so many questions answered!”
Jessica Leslie W, Editorial Assessment
“Working with Elena was a great experience! I feel like Elena struck a perfect balance between identifying the strengths in the opening chapters I provided and identifying opportunities for improvement. The feedback I received felt very fair, spurred new ideas, and made me excited to keep polishing my writing. I look forward to working with Elena more as I continue to develop my story.”
V Torres, Outline Analysis
“Elena’s analysis and feedback of the outline for my dual POV novel was very deep, and helpful. I plan to use it to revise the outline.”
Virginia Oliveria, Manuscript Editing
“Elena was wonderful the moment I reached out to her. All of her replies were quick back to me. She was understanding of past bad experiences and communicated beautifully, being such a positive, understanding person from the get go. Looking at her edits and notes, she has a keen eye for grammar/plot/direction. It's terrifying putting something you've poured your soul in into a strangers hands, but be assured that Elena is the woman you want when you're ready to do this. A great person with amazing editing talent, and more than fair prices with all she includes. She genuinely wants to see her clients succeed. I couldn't recommend her more or been happier with this experience.”
SERVICES
OUTLINE ANALYSIS
($0.008 AUD per word)
Set your story up for success before you even write it. With my Outline Analysis service, you can expect me to meet you where you are. Perhaps you just have the mere bones of your story and need someone to tell you whether you’re on the right track, or you need someone to help you brainstorm further ideas . . .
Or, perhaps you have an extensively detailed outline and would like a fresh set of eyes to spot any pitfalls before you spend months trying to figure them out.
Whichever you are, this service will provide you with the clarity, direction and inspiration you need to get on writing.
Once you submit your inquiry, I will provide you with a questionnaire that will help me get to know your vision and your story’s key elements to appropriately provide my feedback and guide your manuscript in the right direction. When sending it back, you can also submit your core concerns, questions you’d like me to answer and point out any areas you’d like help fleshing out or brainstorming.
What you can expect . . .
When the order is complete, you will receive a 2+ page analysis (longer, should your outline be lengthy) where I highlight the strengths and detail the weaknesses with included suggestions on how to deepen your characters, plot and solidify your themes. The analysis will also address any queries you may have, and if requested, will also provide a brainstorm of ideas in areas of concern.
EDITORIAL ASSESSMENT
($0.009 AUD per word)
Perfect for when you have finished either your first or early draft and are wondering where to take it from here. My Editorial Assessment service offers a detailed report, highlighting the strengths and weaknesses of your story while providing big-picture feedback and offering suggestions on plot, characters and themes.
This type of assessment works deeper than any Alpha or Beta read. It is useful for those whose stories don’t yet have a stable foundation and who need a strong sense of direction when tackling their next draft.
Once you submit your inquiry, I will provide you with a questionnaire that will help me get to know your vision and your story’s key elements to appropriately provide my feedback and guide your manuscript in the right direction. Following the answers, I will review your manuscript and provide:
An evaluation on the plot, characters, themes, structure and arcs
Constructive and honest feedback
Insights to the strengths and weaknesses
Suggestions for improvement
Guidance on approaching the next draft
The length of the report varies, depending on the needs of each particular manuscript; however, the average size of my reports are 4,000 words. This service does not include in-line comments.
What you can expect . . .
MANUSCRIPT EDITING
Transform your novel with my Manuscript Editing services; in-depth edits that go beyond surface-level fixes.
Decide on the level of editing your manuscript needs with one of the services below, or go with the Manuscript Editing Package, which includes all services, from the Developmental Edit to the Proofread for a complete and comprehensive work-through at a packaged rate.
Developmental Edit
The edit that solidifies your plot, rounds out your characters and deepens the impact of your message to ensure an incredible reading experience.
This service includes: in-line comments, a detailed editorial report with advice and suggestions on how to improve the story and a plan to help you address the concerns in the next draft.
($0.015 AUD per word)
Line Edit
The edit that makes your words flow and your prose shine because with the right wording is important to the writers who wish to make the biggest impact.
This service includes: improving clarity and flow, using deliberate word choice in prose and dialogue and enhancing your voice through written suggestions and in-line comments.
($0.012 AUD per word)
Copy Edit
The edit that pays attention to all the grammatical and stylistic details.
This service includes: fixing spelling, grammar and punctuation errors and ensures consistency with capitalisations, punctuations, italics, names and more.
($0.012 AUD per word)
Proofread
The edit right before publication; the final read-through that ensures the layout is seamless and there are no typos.
This service includes: correcting any missed spelling or grammatical error, ensuring the document is consistent and polishing the final presentation.
($0.006 AUD per word)
Manuscript Editing Package
The edit that covers it all. This package combines developmental, line, copy editing and proofreading to guide your manuscript from start to finish.
Over a series of collaborative rounds, you’ll receive detailed feedback, tracked edits, inspired suggestions and strong guidance to help you refine your plot, deepen characters, enhance pacing and perfect your prose.
Together, we’ll work through multiple drafts over several months, allowing you to revise and re-submit as we fine-tune your story to its fullest potential.
This service includes:
In-line comments and a detailed editorial report
Constructive and honest feedback and suggestions
Guidance on how to implement the edits with each draft
Final proofreading for a clean and publication-ready manuscript
Clear communication and ongoing support
($0.038 AUD per word — 15% off)
LET’S WORK TOGETHER
Everything you need to know
FAQ
My Genres: I am experienced with all fiction genres, and I specialise in speculative fiction, romance and contemporary fiction. Unfortunately, I do not accept projects in non-fiction or poetry. If you’re still unsure, please don’t hesitate to inquire!
Turnaround Time: The turnaround depends on the length of your project.
Outline Analysis takes from a few days to a week at most.
Editorial Assessment typically ranges from two to three weeks.
Manuscript Editing typically ranges from three to four weeks; however, the package will range over a few months.
Please feel free to email me for a more accurate time frame.
Document Submission: Please submit your outline or manuscript as either a Microsoft Word file or a Pages document, formatted with a clear font and double spacing.
Payment:
For my Outline Analysis service, I will require the full payment upfront.
Whereas for my Editorial Assessment and Manuscript Editing services, a 50% deposit is due at the time of booking, with the remaining 50% due when you submit your manuscript for assessment or editing.
Please inquire regarding my Manuscript Editing Package.
I accept a Direct Bank Transfer, Paypal and Stripe payments.
AI-Generated Content: I reserve the right to decline any project that has used generative AI tools at any point to assist in its creation. All submitted work must be original and written by you. If you’re unsure whether your project meets this requirement, feel free to reach out and ask.
Still Have Questions? If you still have any queries regarding any of the above or would like a sample edit from me to see if we’d be a good fit, please either complete the form or feel free to reach out at: elena@awakenmystory.com.au. I’d love to hear from you!
